Those who pray and those who care,
Please say that he is still there.
He created Adam,
He created Eve,
He created their love and he created the seed.
He was generous and he was kind,
He was gracious and he didnt mind.
Those who pray and those who care,
Please say that he is still there.
Man became selfish and he became blind,
He created a kingdom ruled by might.
He wanted power, he wanted fame,
He wanted to be known and killed for gain.
He progressed and so he thought,
And so the precious territories for which he fought
After the war came the peace,
And then came again, a bloodfeast.
And so it went on and on,
And in the end became a norm.
This is the story of mankind....and so it will continue till the end of days,
Till he changes his self destructive ways.
And so I say, to those who pray and those who care,
Please hope that God is still there.
-By
Me. (Hoping that God is still everywhere on earth as per popular belief. Contrary to popular belief, I believe God left this place a long time ago, seeing man being such an arrogant bastard that he is today !!!)
11 comments:
wowww,... u wrote ?? nice
@K.c
Yep....I wrote it myself....in a fit of poetic enlightment.
@KC...
Thanks...
Waah waah !!!
Laaaarrrrdddd M aap shayar bhi ho....???
Hum nahi jaante the yeh baat !!!
Badhiya badhiya !!!
@ravan too...
Thanks...
Hamare andar jaroor ek shayar hai....kabhi kabhi uska rhyming schemes kaam kar jaata hai..
nice one!!!!!
Yaar Ravi. The poem was amazing and rhyming. Nice piece of art
P.S: CAN YOU TELL ME THE RHYME SCHEME OF THE POEM?
SCHOOL KA YAAD AA GAYA..ROHIT
@irfan...
Thanks man...
@rohit
Thanks rohit...
The rhyming scheme is probably like this....tell me if its correct...
aabbccddaadefghhiijjkkaa.
How is ur work going on?
The clock is ticking..
Rather Counting Down..
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